She gets teased,
told by the boys
"your cute" or "your hot",
but in reality she knows they think she's not,
Why do they play these evil games?
tear her heart up, thrown in the flames,
hangs her head in shame,
everybody thinks the same,
light brown hair caresses her pale scarred back,
deep dark brown eyes show the deep pain of the lies thats a fact,
her pale face hidden within the dark,
deep scars show the years she's been ripped apart,
her nose breathes in the evil, all shes ever known,
her mouth never smiles, straight line, words describe her "one of a kind"
her small neck holds tubes that keep her alive,
only thing that functions right to survive,
her stomach so small and fragile,
never shows because of the scars,
they tell the story of who we are,
her shoulders and arms bare the weight,
growing weight of raging hate,
getting tired and worn with age,
soon to go on a rampage,
her hands too bare scars of her past,
writing as if life never lasts,
her legs carry her from place to place,
only reason she finishes the race,
muscle difference is great,
but still they guide her to her fate,
her small tiny feet are last but not least,
they help her conquer the ugly beast.
Author notes
Written March 25th, 2006
A contest entry
- Give Me Everything! by Uncle Haku.
1400 points, ended March 10, 2008, 49 entries
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This poem is all over the place structure-wise, and there's really no reason for it. Also, the rhyming is extremely forced, and the grammar is sketchy at best. However, it obviously has a lot of emotion put into it, and that shines through.
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WOW so much passion and truth in this..omg i am crying ..it is sad yet wonderful...great job
emilee

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