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My Future In You


I see my future when I’m looking at you
The white picket fence within your embrace
I hear church bells ringing with the beat of your heart
My children playing in the depths of your laugh
I look in your eyes and my life reflects back
I feel security and comfort when I’m holding your hand
With every kiss I see grandeur visions of my life
When you smile I feel like I’ve found my home
And with that I know my future’s in you.



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Written March 25th, 2006

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  • acesdiamonds88
    August 30, 2006
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    this is really really good. good flow and good word choices. impressive. i hope it ends up this way for you


  • Gemini Dream
    March 25, 2006
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    Nice, I like it alot. It's sweet and romantic. I like the word choice, "My children playing in the depths of your laugh"

    Good work!


  • get N-side my head
    March 25, 2006
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    wicked

    Wow this is very good i like it alot. Only if i knew who my future is in . oh well i guess ill have to wait this one out well got to run
    love always
    me