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Here she is, another living day.
Though the difference is,
she just found out she's dieing
A cancer of some sort,
she won't tell a soul
The day after she finds out,
she lets some people know.

Isn't this so saddening?
She doesn't deserve this pain,
this way of death,
She can't go on like this,
she will die at such a young age
Just that of 16 soon.

so say goodbye,
she believes she won't be missed
even through the tears they cry...
she believes she will be forgotten.

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Wether this is good or not, its a freeverse and its about my friend, not me....
Written March 24th, 2006

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  • The Black Raven
    March 17, 2007
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    injoy

    is this ture


  • November 17, 2006
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    this is a sad and touching write.


  • Shay89
    March 25, 2006
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    It's very good, but it's sad. I'm sorry your friend is going through this. It's sad that she thinks no one will remember her. Keep up the great writing, and let your friend know that you won't ever forget her.


  • The Black Raven
    March 24, 2006
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    sad but ture

    is this ture is it about you

  • Cacophony of Chaos silver member
    March 24, 2006
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    Im sorry that this is happening to your friend. If you need anything im here for ya!

    <3
    Rayne

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