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Open To Defacation

Pry me open and take what you need,
The rust on these bones hurts, so,
I'd rather be unhinged than stiff,
(I still don't have anywhere to go.)

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I don't think I'll add on. I like it.
Written March 24th, 2006

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  • Evolutionary
    March 24, 2006
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    I like it. The rhyme is awkward but somehow that makes it sound better, with crooked flow. Good job. ^^