I want you to hurt
And cry every night
I want you to feel pain
Kill you inside.
I want you to feel guilty.
For the words you said
I want you to hurt
And want to fall over dead.
I dont want you to slap me
Like you've done once before
I don't want you to hurt me
And leave me crying on the floor.
So if you read this.
Know its to you
I want nothing but pain
To be brought to you.
Author notes
ex fiance.
Written March 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- The dark side of love by sappho87.
300 points, ended April 15, 2006, 18 entries
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Hehe, i like this. I hope they get what they deserve. Good write hun, keep it up, i hope you do well in the contest
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Glad to see you are at your best again when it comes to the poetry scheme. Dark, emotional, always a talented write. Sorry to hear what has happened. I look forward to many more poems from you that will most likely inspire a write or 60 from me.
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I cant recall if this has asked for a critical comment but even if it did I feel I have no right to given the subject matter.
Dark, indeed. Im glad to see that its about your EX fiancé. No one should have to live with a significant other who brings them harm, be it physical like here or emotional.
Good job, m'dear, and thanks for entering. -
Damn. Damn damn damn, hun...that's deep. That person deserves to be slapped. They suck ass....grr...Good poem.
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