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Alone on an Untraveled Dirt Road

Alone on an Untraveled Dirt Road

I stand alone on an untraveled dirt road,
Alone.
The trust that is my life I handed to you,
A look at the key you took
The key to my life
It being my trust
A look into my eyes told me you understood
My trust you would never loose
My side you would never leave
My trust was our bond
You would never do anything to loose it
You would never leave me in that dark room that holds my every worry and fear.
Now it¡¯s over,
You lost it
You lost my trust
As if you threw away the key
You were the one I trusted to lead me through that untraveled dirt road
Filled with nauseating smells of dust, worries, and fright dancing in the air.
You turned around and threw away the key
The key to my trust and then laughed with your goofy friends.
Thrown away without a care.
A look back you never took,
To see me standing
Alone, afraid, worried
On that untraveled dirt road.
A scream for help,
Despair from my part,
But you are deaf to my whimpering pleas for help.
You don¡¯t look back
You don¡¯t care
A road only you could have helped me travel
Instead you left me there,
Alone, stranded
You left me after I gave you the key to my soul,
My trust.
Thank you, I¡¯ll never forget how you left me like that,
I hate you for that.


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I dedicate this to someone, maybe finally you'll figure out what you did to me, and why I hate you.
Written March 23rd, 2006

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  • -simply me-
    May 12, 2006
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    Hey. Whats up? Sorry I haven't talked to you in awhile school is ending and I have been pretty stressed out writing a whole bunch of papers for school and for a credit I took for my trip, and to add ontop my best friend from our toddler years is moving in two weeks while we thought it was four and I still have school and finals and all this crap. So I am pretty stressed out, but as soon as I destressed and have all my school stuff taken care I'll talk to you nonstop, I swear.
    Muax Love you


  • Depths-of-the-Ocean
    May 11, 2006
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    Hey stranger, still writing and talkin french i see, i'm glad you had a safe trip. Good adventurous poem. Kool.


  • legendd
    March 31, 2006
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    very well written. i like this. keep up the great work dear.
    sara