Well I guess this is just one of those things
that you cant help but laugh when you hear it.
I guess this is just one of those things that you blow off,
go on, blow it off.
I guess this is just one of those things
that you think that I'll change my mind on another day.
you never loved me
anyway.
Anyway.
Well I guess this is just one of those things
that you close your eyes to.
Say goodbye to.
I guess this is just one of those things
that you give up without a fight.
Say good night.
Goodnight.
Well I guess it's my turn to do the walking,
to do the talking.
I guess this is just one of those things
that I gotta do.
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Written March 23rd, 2006
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You know you should get someone to sing this, sounds like a lyric... They hare bloody hard to write and I think you've got in you.
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I wish I could comment, but I have no idea what the actual topic is. There is a meaning in there somewhere, but I just can't seem to find it, so I am going to guess that this poem is a private poem between you and your friends/enemies. Even so, this sentence
"I guess this is just one of those things
that you think that I'll change my mind on another day"
take away the second that, and it would work far better.
Just thought you would like to know
Still, I guess it's good work, even though I don't know what you are talking about -
im just hoping in some weird way this has nothing to do with me
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Thanks Foxy.
-Becca -
Your comment has really made me happy. Not only because you told me why you liked it, but because you showed that you still have an ouce of caring even though i went AWOL for about 6 months. Good to know you still read.
And Also, because being compared to Elliott Smith is the greatest compliment I could recieve.
Even though this was just a peice I threw toghther when I was bored and started to make up song lyrics.
Thanks again Aahos.
-Becca
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This was really, really good, Becca..
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i really like this , it reminds me of elliott smith lyrics.
i thought that this was quite a thoughtfull peice, it seems like your sad about somthing and i wish you weren't.
my favorite stanza was the one that starts with: Well I guess this is just one of those things
that you close your eyes to.
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