While I am here,
My words fly above.
You have nothing to fear,
Give in to this love.
Blessed be.
Author notes
Option 5...though spells are usually longer than 5 lines. And I wouldn't recommend trying to use it--it's not specific enough to work. lol
Written March 23rd, 2006
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short and cute. well yeah, spells may be more than 5 lines, but take it that these are the 'unusual' ones.. lol! i wan to see how much one can compress words and bring an impact with it.
if you feel it's not specific enough, try altering to stregthen it. spells should after all, not go haywire!
Thanks for the appreciated entry! Good luck! -
Now this is a clever write.
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