If nobody knows,
then nobody can care,
Everything especially life just isn't fair,
I sit here in wonder,
What can I do?
to prove that I really do love you,
I'd slit my wrist,
take the risk,
losing my life,
one slip of the knife,
I know I'll lose it one day,
my heart and mind will fade away,
I'll lay in the ground,
no beat no sound,
everyone will be happy im not around,
i'm a teenage girl, full of defliction,
my heart has put on all sorts of restrictions,
feeling so powerless and low,
If I said I loved you I know you wouldn't think so.
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Written March 23rd, 2006
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i'm gonna dedicate this poem to my b/f.
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*wow*
i would point out my favorite part of this write but i lovet he whole thing..
so it's kinda hard ta say.
lol
your work is amazing!!
keep it up honey.
loves...*kitty*
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wow... this is awesome! i love it!!
*nessa marie* -
You have extinquished your heart in black coal never to let someone rekindle the love within. I can relate to this. Never assume that there is no-one to talk to or even lean on. If perhaps you feel this way, I will be here to talk. I loved your write although dark. I have traveled this darkened path before and I am sure that someday you too will see the light and become happy once again. Great Write! Hugs
~val~
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awesome
awww your welcome, I really love this im just going to keep sending you comments on how I love this so I guess I better stop before I get on your nerves too much!!!!!
always
~courtney~ -
extraordinary
wow this is amazing I love it to death, you are truly gifted and have an amazing talent, it flows so perfectly I had to promote this I hope you dont mind... this is soo well written great job im like speechless. great job
always
~courtney~
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