SweetCakes

Sweeter that Honey,
Wetter than Water,
Exceptional all Around,
Expanding Personality,
Treasure me as a precious Jewel,
Caress my Soul,
Allow the love to Flow,
Kindred spirits Connect,
Exploring the Universe,
Seeking a quiet corner to Rest.

Yvonne J. Griffin
3/22/06

Author notes

I actually wrote this yesterday. Thank you CMW for the great title...You are a sweet heart.

P.s. This was suppose to be an erotic piece, but this is what came out of me.

Yvonne
Written March 23rd, 2006

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Loveandblessings2u
March 31, 2006
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awwwwww this is great, a very good job. short but ohhhh so sweet.
pozo
March 24, 2006
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Line 2 to me seems erotic Could just be my dirty mind though... 'wet' does this have other positive meanings than excited (female)? I mean 'wet' can mean weak but...
Good use of alliteration here Keep writing, I liked the expression of love here Good imagery
Thanks for your comment
All the best
Pozo
Cwm
March 24, 2006
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You're amazing and beautiful Yvonne! You can write anything acrostic style! I also think you have alittle crush on me... but I will speculate on that later!

Excellent as always dear.

Curtis
M.
bludstaindsoliloquy
March 23, 2006
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I like this much better for what it is . . . bliss . . . uncorruptable, passionate perfection! Romantic . . . sensual . . . wonderful! Keep penning . . . and please . . . keep right on sharing!

Maggie
Roseleaf
March 23, 2006
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interesting for erotic
your spirit is still shining through the words that you share and hope your romance gets better for you as time goes by

~~Pauline