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Missed You

For the past couple of days,
I've felt so outta place,
Everyone saw it on my face,
no trace of the sparkles in my eyes,
in my world only grey dark skies,

Everyday I'd walk in,
praying and hoping I'd see you again,
First bell rings your not here,
confirmnation of my fears,
People tell me to keep up hope,
You'll walk through the door,

2nd bell rings still no you,
what am i supose to do?
Should I walk alone or wait?
Only God determines our fate,

After awhile I wipe the tears from my eyes,
Keep my head high because that's what you want,
Your face haunts me all through the day,
I keep missin you while your away.

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Written March 23rd, 2006

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  • issue
    March 25, 2007
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    lovely

    hey nice work uve done there.. i like it! especially this line here:

    2nd bell rings still no you,
    what am i supose to do?
    Should I walk alone or wait?
    Only God determines our fate,

    its spelled suppose btw

    thanks for sharing

  • BehindTheseEyes03
    April 7, 2006
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    thats so wonderful! awesome write! im sory about ur friend...may i ask...wat happened?


  • hollywood.
    March 30, 2006
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    oh!! i love this one! its sooooo cute!! keep it up!!
    *nessa marie*

  • BlackEagle
    March 23, 2006
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    Nice job baby. I hated having to leave you alone for a few days and im glad to be back with you again after being out for 2 days. Not sure how long i can stay around today, but i dont plan on leaving untill after your at lunch with diana. Love you baby. Keep up the good work.