I never thought
that I would find
someone like you;
you blow my mind
I never thought
that my heart would heal;
that someone like you
could even be real.
I never thought
that I was worth it;
to know the love
of someone so perfect.
I never thought
that it could be;
that someone like you
would love someone like me.
No one thought
that we would last,
but I told them
to kiss my ass.
No one thought
that we'd stay together,
but I told them,
that we'll be forever.
I never thought,
but none can deny,
that as long as I have you
I'll be happy 'til I die.
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Dunno what to say about this one. . . Tell me what you think.
Written March 22nd, 2006
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this was a really great write i like it and keep up the good work i hope u guys r together forever!!
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That's right. . . and while you're down there. . . . JK
Did you read my other one tho?? It's called 'With You'. Go check it out. . . -
GOOD ONE N8 I BOW TO THE MY MASTER
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Nate, this is beautiful, Moey oughtta love it!! Wonderful rhyming and the flow is great. Expressing your and a good kiss my ass to the people who ever doubted your love for one another!! Love it ~~~~ Keep Penning, bout itme i got a new one to read!!!!
Emily~ -
I never thought
that I would find
someone like you.
It blows my mind.
is sepreate then all you're other stanzas in the beat, maybe if it read as:
i never thought
that i would find
some one like you
to blow my mind.
the period really throws it,
other then that i like it.
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