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Back in the day

I remember back in the day,
laughing through a purple haze.
Breathing in this whitish smoke,
and dodging glances in the halls.
I never let a pair of eyes,
see past this tough exterior.
I rolled around and stained my jeans,
while singing pointless songs.
I remember back in the day,
I feel in love with you.


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It needs work...
Written March 22nd, 2006

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  • Pyronic rodent
    March 22, 2006
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    it needs some work but its good

  • killa queen
    March 22, 2006
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    Wow..... I really liked this It makes me think of highschool and how everything is so fake and childish and you don't care and you dream of love and you cling to it. I really liked this. I just really loved the ending. Great piece keep up the good work. Voidnight