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Fantasia

The childhood age of discovery,
is many titillations by degree.
Every child enchanted by nature,
finds much in life meant to savor.

Sweet aromas give sensations,
quiet moments of celebration.
Enhanced by new found sensitivity,
in the trickling sounds of a stream.

Toes tickled caressing fauna,
heighten senses of nirvana.
Smiles of innocence in delight,
enticing rapture day and night.

Life was meant to partake of and enjoy,
by every childhood girl and boy.


            ~~~Suseann~~~

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Written March 22nd, 2006

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  • honey bear
    May 20, 2006
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    lovely

    a very very sweet read my friend,one that will refresh memories in lots of people ,keep up the good work and thank you for sharing


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    March 25, 2006
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    That was a very sweet and beautiful Poem Suseann
    I really liked it and enjoyed reading it very much.. Nice choice of words, rhyme and flow
    (Wasn't this a contest picture, if i remember? lol which rarely happens )

    Keep on writing..
    Nooni


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 22, 2006
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    Lovely imagery and word usage. you have captured the soul of the painting. thank you for this entry... x