wake up every day,
ready to get rid of the rage,
trapped in the cage of life,
can't get out without a fight,
never see the light,
second year of high school,
why are people so cruel?
What's a girl to do?
Goes home and cries,
stares out the window looking to the sky,
silently wishing to die,
be an angel, learn to fly,
fly ever so high,
Dark in the night,
heart and mind fight,
tears blind her sight,
grabs her knife,
cuts away at her life,
slowly blood drips,
don't think of those who will flip,
anger slowly will slip,
can't take back whats done,
won't it be fun,
to see her body laid down under the sun.
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Written March 22nd, 2006
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NOT UR BODY!!!!!!!!!!!
:'(
loves... *kitty*
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Wow! This was very well written. I loved the ending. It was very sad. Great write and keep writing!
*snap* -
awesome!
check out some of my work sometime!
~Ria -
Good job!
Omg! i am so sorry you feel this way,
no one deserves that i would never treat you like this
and i barly know you
you writting is so awsome keep it up!
♥Sara -
Wonderful write babe! I love it! Keep up the good work and remember if you ever need someone to vent to I'm here! I will always be here for yas!
Love yas,
Sarah AKA LadyDragonWolfe SMOOSH! -
thank you for the comment but you cant always blame yourself for your problems. Sometimes your only partly to blame but you take full blame bc thats what people want. Its ok to vent bout everything..Teenagers as well as adults need to vent to someone if we dont talk about everything n. keep it bottled up it'll just get worse.
~Crys~ -
Awesome-Kinda like you
you know everyone takes their sad storied lives for granted, BUT YOU, you have a story to tell. I want to pray for you and I hope you relize no matter what, life is worth more than the conceited minds of other people. Its worth more when you take out the beggars and the boasters. And you have a long way to go. So no matters what happens God will always be there for you. Before I go I just want to thank you this poem has showed me that my life was my fault and yours wasn't so what sympathy or compassion do I show for you and many other when I'm complaining about the problems I MYSELF caused. Don't let the next time you see the light be the last. Thank you. -
this is a deep and sad poem. I understand that high school can be very hard and some people can be very crule. and that sux for everyone just try to not let them bother you if you are really feeling this way.. yes it is very hard sometimes... but just try to look at the bright side of things. I hope everything gets better and im sure in time it will. I loved your poem it flowed together very well. Good job and keep it up
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This is so Great!!!!!!!! You have a lot of emotion here. I can really feel it. If you ever ned to talk, I'm here for ya babe!!!!!! Love YA
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This is very deep and i know exactly what you mean because my second year of high school was freakin' killer. I was so depressed and just wanted everytime to disappear. I finally dumped my 8th month boyfriend met a new guy and fell in love and now i cant see him but he did alot for me and he helped me step out of the circle/bubble i was in. This is a great write and one day you will have something to great happen to you and it will change you forever;in a good way. Great job & keep it up!check out some of my writes?
-karen
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