I hope you at least got some sleep.
I just wanted to say thank you for all the great times we had.
I really thought we had it this time.
But i was sadly mistaken, Its over you and I.
And I dont understand why.
It was a phone call that lasted 20 minutes but went on all night.
I had a dream last night that I bought all new clothing,
and a brand new alarm clock, your picture was still by my bed,
but you looked like you had lost your mind.
And you did.
I hope you at least got some sleep.
I just wanted to say thank you for all the great times we had.
I really thought we had it this time.
But i was sadly mistaken, Its over you and I.
And I dont understand why.
It was a phone call that lasted 20 minutes but went on all night.
Last night was a horrible rollercoaster ride,
all i wanted to do was catch some sleep,
but you were dead on with your attitude antics,
and I couldn't take it anymore.
I had to draw the line,
through all these fighting nights,
I wanted to make it all better...
but you only wanted to make things worse.
I hope you at least got some sleep.
I just wanted to say thank you for all the great times we had.
I really thought we had it this time.
But i was sadly mistaken, Its over you and I.
And I dont understand why.
It was a phone call that lasted 20 minutes but went on all night.
I didnt know it would end this way,
but now it did,
I have nothing left to say so close your eyes,
I'll be going now.
You had your chance to speak to me and you took it for granted.
I hope you at least got some sleep.
I just wanted to say thank you for all the great times we had.
I really thought we had it this time.
But i was sadly mistaken, Its over you and I.
And I dont understand why.
It was a phone call that lasted 20 minutes but went on all night.
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Written March 22nd, 2006
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Aw, the part about the 20 minute phone call that lasted all night really had some impact on me. I hate it when you have a fight, or break up with someone and all you think about all night is them and the things you said and did. I'm sorry. Hope this wasn't recent, if it was, I hope you feel better. great lyrics. Good job!
<3 Sara -
That was great. I bet you play guitar and sing it. I bet it sounds really great. If not, you should make it into a song.
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Reminds me of the song by Matchbox20 - "Rest Stop"... I've felt this heartbreaking pain more than once in my life...leaving me asking myself...Why? What could I do differently, please don't leave I'l change I promise. Then I relized that I didn't need to chage but be myself, too much energy to be something for someone else...you lose sight of you.
Great write, keep up the good work. Many blessings to you. -
i really like this... i would love to hear it as a song... what kind of genre would it be??? ROCK, Folk, bules, jaz, punk? there are a lot to choose from... i can hear it as Country Rock... LOL...
but hey thats just me...
reminds me of something that happened with an ex girlfriend and I... SIGH...
i can feel every word...
sometimes, when another person is involved, its hard to let the emotions flow... but you have done a good job...
keep Writing..
~Katrina Anne -
very interesting...it seems like there may be a long story behind this. it reminds me quite a bit of the dynamic between my ex fiance and i.
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