like the pale of a winter snow
your skin so deathly white
contrasting with your cherry red lips
it all seems so right
why do you deny it?
our love so deep
together we can find it
together we can be
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Written March 21st, 2006
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nice stuff!!!!!great job!!!i really enjoyed reading this...it felt really cool...great job!!!!loved it!!!keep writing!!! -
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yes it was thank you, i corrected it
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great job! excellent!
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Aww this is so sweet.
You did a great job,
Just one thing though...
On the second line isn't you suppose to be your?
But other than that, fantastic right!
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i linked this!! you did a fantastic job with the vivid feelings and the way you created a pic in my head!!
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wow. this is really good Brooke. I dont think I have read anything of yours so sentimental. Great job and great imagry. I imagined two pale white people kissing with red lipstick on.
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