You used to call me
your pretty butterfly
You were the one who
taught me how to fly
Do you remember that
starry velvet night
As you took me on a journey
I remembered for life
Ever so gentle you took of my gown
Sensuously you kissed me
Heightened all my senses
Movement and touch
you never relented
My body hot
My breath deeper and deepened
Then like magic higher I flew
till space and time were one
My journey went on and on
Slightest touch sent me higher and higher
body filled with love and desires
Feelings i have never known
And have never known since
Butterflies do not live for
long do they
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Written March 21st, 2006
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Glad you enjoyed this ..I forget what i write and i have had not written anything for a few months , so it is nice to come across one of mine that is not as familure
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Beautiful write! And your ending is breathtaking!
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OW i forgot i had writen this one ..Thanks so much glad you liked it
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WONDERFUL POEM
Such a sweet poem about the first time. I love the comparrison to a butterfly. Sometimes love is fleeting but we have the bittersweet memories to hold onto. Thank you for sharing this amazing poem. Excellent write. Take care, Sandy
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Glad you enjoyed it .I had forgotten i had written it lol
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Hi draco did not realie you had left a comment March .Thank you
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kind of sad, that such happiness should be so fleeting--kind of knew it would be coming from the first lines--"used to" and the whole butterfly reference--half expected (him?) to pin you to a viewing board! Still, evocative in its own right, and a pleasant read to boot! thanks for sharing this! john
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What a beautiful comment thank you
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Ohhh, this is so sweet and then ends so sadly. I wish the butterfly lived forever! But a new butterfly shall emerge!
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Hi Aries
I am a Aries too .
Glad you liked it and felt the sad part too -
Shzoosy .Thanks for your nice comment glad you liked it .
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Very good work. Nice imagery and it sets a definite mood. A very romantic, enjoyable read with a slightly sad ending. Thank you very much for sharing.
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lovely poem about loss of innocence..at least that's my take on it... peace..shzoosy
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