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I See...... Myself

Looking at my reflection in the river
A river that is filled with sorrow
Tears I have cried for too long a time
But now it's time to venture 'marrow
As if tomorrow will bring back the joy

My eyes, they shine, the way they use to
When you and I would laugh and play
But better times and better days have past
Our innocent desires became so stray
So now, with loneliness long gone, I smile

Looking at myself in such a way that life
Not love could take me on an amazing trip
Down those roads I could never before explore
Fine pleasures! I surely will take a sip
... I stumble on a log drooped from the past

I look into a river to see my own reflection
I try but will never get over those days together
Stuck somewhere between then and never again
As if in the wind a wayward lone feather
Finding, no searching, for a place to go


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un ya i confused
Written March 21st, 2006

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  • imprisioned soul
    March 23, 2006
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    amazing

    awesome i love it. deep words
    that show a good sense of feeling.
    good job!!

    ~helplesslylost

  • tragediey-stricken
    March 22, 2006
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    great

    I like!! I do't think I would change a thing.
    great job!!

  • MichelleLynn
    March 22, 2006
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    hey this is really good! keep it
    Morbid Skittles