Love is a peculiar----sensation
that provokes one to feel the
overwhelming
need to mashoneselfupagainstanother
just to feel
close
enough to----fly.
Love is the only----reason
anyone has ever
desired
to have the saliva of
another
mixed with their own.
Love is a----disease
spread only by
contact
or the enticing glance
from across the room
airport
bedroom.
Love is a wet----book
with its pages
all soggy and stucktogether
so that most of the
story
must be m a d e up.
Love is an awful----addiction
to imperfektion and
the simultaneous
feelings of
ecstacy and empti-ness
and endlessness and
glee.
Love is the only----killer
that can make the
victim
want to die without
putting up
a----fight.
Love is----
----irreversible.
Author notes
Written March 21st, 2006
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powerful
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Love is confusing. No that isn't a commentary on your poem...just the facts about love lol. I found the poem to be an interesting read. I like your word spacing with mashoneselfupagainstanother and stucktogether...An interesting visual effect. Overall, a very enjoyable piece. Keep writing!
Rory -
I really think you hit this one almost on the button. There are a few good reason and things that make it more desireable then you've make it sound but never the less it was very well writen and very enjoyable to read, awesome job.
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excellent
Interesting write. I too would love to know what you where thinking when you wrote this. CAn be so many ways of interpeting it. Curious of what your thought was. I my self felt alot of pain. Someone hurting. Well expressed. Well done.
Keep up the good writing
Victoria -
awesome
I don't get ittttttttttttttttt. But it's really well written. I love you!
-Will -
What song is this? I know there's a band called 3 hour parking, and a song called "Love?" which I'm rather fond of, but I'm curious about what you're thinking of.
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thanks
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Wow! I have never heard love described in so true words. I think you hit it right on the spot. I loved the style, and the message. The ending was strong (along with the whole poem!) This was so good that I'm going to bookmark it. Keep writing! - *SNAP* P.S. I love your name...it's weird because I had that song stuck in my head today...lol...keep up the great work!
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Outstanding
Deep way deep someone shares the pain and power through words well done
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