When is it love?
When you think of him when you first wake
and when he's the last thought at night
When is it Love?
When he's gone your heart aches
and how you calm instantly when he says everything will be alright
When is it love?
It's love when you can't get your work done
and when you steal his car keys so that he come back inside to find them and you
When is it love?
When your mind screams when he calls you Hun
and when he has a business drip you suddenly find yourself sad and blue
When is it love?
When you can stare in his eyes and say i do
and when you cry when he says them back to you!
Author notes
i worked for a long time on this so i hope you like it
Written March 21st, 2006
A contest entry
- The Wedding of Crystal - Heart and Andy Stephenson by Andy Stephenson.
400 points, ended May 15, 2006, 9 entries
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This is a lovely poem and a great idea to write about. Thank you for choosing to enter our contest.
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I loved your poem, Hope, it's really good. Where did you come up with this???
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hey i liked this a lot!! it was good, i like the setup you used. very cute.. i like the part about the car keys
anyways keep up the good work
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"business drip" i assuming you meant trip right??? i REALLY like the rep of "When is it love?" it ties the whole thing together well. i can tell you worked on this a long time. well done! good luck!
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