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Empty rain

Everything around me crashes down.
I'm stuck, bruised and bleeding,
beneath the remains.
I reach out for your hand to pull me out,
all that touches me is the rain.
This never ending rain.



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Written March 21st, 2006

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  • angel-lover
    March 21, 2006
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    deep emotions

    deep,i really loved this.great write.


  • Pyronic rodent
    March 21, 2006
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    wow, short and deep... i like it alot, its really sad great job