These sorrowful eyes have seen everything,
The pain, The lies, The hurt,
They've stayed up all night when you were gone,
And have cried all day when you home,
They've took all your crap,
Please give them a break,
They have closed on command when they thought they would get a surprise but were jerked open with a painful punch,
They have hid in a small dark corner,
They've been in pieces too many times before,
They've been left hungary and homeless,
They've seen all there is to see except the most important thing,
They've never seen love,
They long for a glipse of compasion,
A little blink of the eye,
A little slap on the back,
Even just a little emotion,
From the one that has brought them into this world.
Author notes
This hasnt happend to me thankfully just thought i would write it for the ones that it does apply to.....
Written March 21st, 2006
A contest entry
- Can you do it? by Shancy Fayre.
300 points, ended March 27, 2006, 21 entries
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This is such a sad but beautiful poem. I love the flow of it, the emotion...it's a wonderful piece of work. I am convinced you will do well in the contest. Thank you for sharing this poem with us all!
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i didnt think it posted i was gonna go back and do that...i didnt think it posted dang it ....sorry i meant to fix them
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This is a sad poem filled with emotion. Since there are several
spelling mistakes, you might want to use the spell check under the type box. Thank you so much for entering. Shancy.
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