I never really knew you
you were just that special friend
But when I got to know you,
I let my heart unbend.
I couldn't help my feelings
they would only make me cry
I had to forget about love
and give another love a try
So I've fallen in love with you
and I'll never let you go
I love you more than anyone
I just had to let you know
And if you ever wonder why
I don't know what I'll say
But I'll never stop loving you
each and every day
My love for you will never change
Just know my love is true
Just remember I Love You!
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Written March 21st, 2006
A contest entry
- Love, love me do! (contest) by Phed.
300 points, ended April 14, 2006, 30 entries
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The clarity and conciseness of the lines give this poem an emotional edge. The rhyme and overall rhythm is well done too.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
Edited on Apr 21, 7:42 because 'typo'. -
this is very sweetly and simply said
thank you for entering and good luck
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Wonderful chica! Your poetry is getting a LOT better! Keep up the wonderful work babe, and remember if you need someone I'm always here. BTW just forget about that asshole and get on with your life!
Love yas lots,
Blessed Be & Brightest Blessings,
Sarah AKA LadyDragonWolfe
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Great job You should show to whoever its for
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hey good poem, it's rli sweet! i'm sure greg will be happy about it, do you show him your poetry? anyways, the last line kinda doesnt go with the flow...so you might wanna add a word or two. i like these lines:
I couldn't help my feelings
they would only make me cry
I had to forget about love
and give another love a try
thats nice! good job and keep it up!
aureola
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