Welling up inside of me again
Feelings of burning hate and rage
Yet a calm pool of serenity I remain to eyes
Eyes as windows
To peer and witness the carnage
Of my minds savage massacre
Blank and un-repented
I stand as a tower
In the calm of a raging storm
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Written February 6th, 2000
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You have great control over your writing skills. I enjoyed reading your poem. I specially like how you've brought out the anger feelings in words. Good Work!
-Arooj-
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how very dark, a nice write all the more, i liked the way it flowed and the way you wrote it out, nice job and keep the pen flowing
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Amazing!
What I like most about this poem was the fact that it was so haertfelt or candid, which makes for a great piece. I think anyone who reads it will feel what you"re saying. It"s great when a poet can use words to move readers, and you truly moved me. I really admire the similes you used, yourself being the tower in the storm and such. It was simple yet powerful!
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Superb
Wow, reminds me of past years of my life when I was going thru some personal problems, which got resolved.
Very well written indeed.
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Welling up inside of me again
Feelings of burning hate and rage
Yet a calm pool of serenity I remain to eyes
great writing
i enjoyed its suimplicity and rediance
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nice...angry, and yet controlled....u should title it though....maybe like "Anger" or "Control" seems appropiate for it. Good write, you have an awesome use of words. It short, and sweet, and i love the big words. I enjoy things that use the bigger words in the poetry even though it means it is sometimes too hard to read. I hope that u can overcome ur anger because i know how it is to have an uncontrollable anger, and not wanting to allow it to escape....good job, and i hope u overcome....
In Christ,
Jake
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