Scream at me.
You seem to be getting better.
Tell me I'm worthless.
Do you think I don't already know that?
Hit me again.
The pain feels fulfilling.
Do what you like to me.
I don't care anymore.
I've learned to take it.
I've learned to say FUCK IT!!
Hate me.
I expect it.
Abuse my trust.
I'm used to it.
Play with my heart.
I want to hate you.
Mess with my mind.
I don't care anymore.
I've learned to forget it.
I've learned to say FUCK IT!!
Fuck the pain
Fuck the lies
Fuck them
Fuck you
Fuck life
But I wont die,
no, not yet.
I wont give you the satisfaction,
no, not ever.
I want you to watch me,
I'll live my "happily ever after",
Without you nailing my wings to the ground.
I'll always have a smile on my face,
Without you stapling it on (for me).
I'll live a successful life,
Without you pulling my reins.
I want you to watch me,
carrying this mirror around...
So you can see yourself lose.
You taught me something
You taught me to live
You taught me not to dwell on things
You taught me to say FUCK IT!!
And now, as an apprentice to their master,
FUCK YOU!!
Author notes
"I apologize for being human"
yay!! i dunno.....im not really mad so yeah...im not sure where this came from....maybe from my past...hrmmm.....ah well, i guess i like it.
Written March 21st, 2006
A contest entry
- Taking it out on you... by Flightless Raven.
1200 points, ended February 14, 2008, 13 entries
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I'm glad that you rose above this
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yeah, me too...gosh I remember. lolz
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this is all about the past...
this contest, my anger which cuased me to make this contest, all of it..so this is what i was looking for.
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Every word in this rocks... odd I say that because it has a lyrical twist to it. I would love to choose my favorite part of the poem but it is the whole thing.
Abuse my trust.
I'm used to it.
This sums me up.
Thank you for sharing this write.
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F-it i feel u in me..F-it i feel u near me (g
now that this is finished it is good! look at that... your first poem with 3 applause! (well that i know of anyways) great job. *lol* you didnt get this from seether... you got that from what i said to you in class. tee-hee. welp g2g byeseez
*_*Triste*_*
*******THE VERDICT CUT OFF WHAT I PUT... THIS IS WHAT I SAID: F-it i feel u in me F- i feel u near me (go seether woohoo)
Edited on Mar 25, 5:11 p.m. because 'verdict messed up'. -
very good
your right, it is a better now that it is done. -
argh!
darn that stupid bell! *lol* you could have been able to finish if it didnt ring. grrness! anywho. so far this is good. i see a lot of angst in it. who is this for anyways? just wondering. i need help with my homework... for jackson... i have to write a poem "of my choice" && you know i have over 100 to choose from... cause right now i have a semi-writer's-block. i mean im about to right a poem now... actually a couple... but iono. well i just need to know which one i should do. gonna go now! love ya bunces. && again. great job on this so far!
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very good
wow, so much pain and anxiety. i loved it. keep up the good work.
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