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This bloody rose

This rose is gone and withered away,
 Much like the happiness of today.
   She loves you more then she will confess,
     And much more then you can digest.
Her scars show a broken heart,
 it was not ruined from the start.
   The blood that drips will burn when touched,
     The blood falls often once clutched.
There is acid seeping through her veins,
 this is brought about her captive chains.
   so pick the petals one by one,
     nothing will be left when you are done.

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Okay, this is weird. but oh well, if you read comment.
Written March 20th, 2006

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  • The Black Raven
    March 17, 2007
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    wow

    these poems are m,aking me happy again


  • apblows
    April 20, 2006
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    The Best!

    i absolutely love it... its so strange, so meaningful. i just cant stop rereading it. wonderful!


  • Shay89
    March 20, 2006
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    awesome. I loved it keep up the lovely work


  • PoetryPunky
    March 20, 2006
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    I really like this peice. A few lines felt short but its still good. Umm...i dunno whatelse...good write keep writing and i hope to see some of your pictures!


  • March 20, 2006
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    very deep you express yourself very well

  • luckyschoice92
    March 20, 2006
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    so deep. im completley speachless.

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