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Dieing with love

My tears fall with the rain
as i stand out side my door,

My body is hurting, my mind is spinning
I fall and hit the floor,

My blood dripps off of my arm
i cant feel the pain anymore,

my eyes feel so heavy and weak
i close my eyes and cover my soar,

I killed my self
cause it was you i adore,

You didnt want me, cause i wasnt the same
as all your other girls, nothing but whore's,

You could had loved me
as I have you before,

Author notes

I dont exactly know what i meant by this poem i just kinda know that lol i was in the mood and im guessing that the girl was not popular and the guy didnt like her and she killed herself. over a guy. so yea..peace out and tell me what you think
Written March 20th, 2006

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  • March 21, 2006
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    sad,and at the same time i feel love. very good brittney. keep it up. girl, stay cool,