Its's a mystical,magical fantasyland
Full of light,love and laughter
Fairy wings of indigo blues, green, and gold
Shimmer forever after,
Happiness abounds by a bubbling brook
In moss-grown-crannies and secret nooks
Never knowing what one might find
But the enchanted fairies will ease our minds
Scattering fairy dust from their magical wands
Takes our heart and minds
To a world beyond....
While up above a moombean shimmers
And fairie dreams always glimmer
Deep dark forest suddenly seem brighter
As enchanted dreams grow even lighter
Endless rivers forever flow
Where the fairies will take us
Never will we know
On gossamer wings
They fly away
To bring us back a silver moonbeam
For magical wishes on another day~
Author notes
Written February 10th, 2003
A contest entry
- FAIRES, ELFS, FANTACY LOADS OF FUN by Treasure 5.
900 points, ended April 20, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - All Fairy and Angel prewrites contests No 1st 2nd or 3rd place winners Fresh writes wanted now by Treasure 5.
750 points, ended July 18, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is such a beautiful picture you have to go with this wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing and entering and it was a pleasure to read
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I wish you would of gave me the 25 to 50 lines I asked for. This is a beautiful wright you have here. Thanks for entering. It was a pleasure to read.
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Such a beautiful and magical write Susan. A wonderful fanastyland you have created here.
Best wishes in the contest.
Your Sis
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This is the sort of poem that you creates so very well sis. Yor words weave pure magic for the reader to enjoy. Good luck in the contest.
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Sis, this was absolutely magical! I loved the imagery that helped to create such a beautful, fantasy world. Ahhh, but to be able to fly off on those fairy gossamer wings to such an enchanted place, even if only for a short while Beautiful, enchanting write, Sis! Good luck in the contest!
Linda
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Wow, Sis, would I ever love to live here.. What a wonderful world you've created with your words!
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pretty pretty sis, how are you feeling these days? getting better i hope? lovely fairy you have as the picture here.
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Wonderful
What a great creation for theme. so very magical. Best of luck in the contest.
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aw this is beautiful sis I love your imagery throughout good luck in the contestmaralisa
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"Fairy wings of indigo blues, green, and gold
Shimmer forever after,"
Magical images you create
in your loving, fanciful way!
A joy to read, Susan.
M-C
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What a wonderful write sweetie, very nice.
Beautiful Sis....Best wishes in the contest
Bro
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Oh to be taken to a magical place like this. Nice imagery and use of your wonderful vocabulary.
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Excellent
Nicely done. This piece does a wonderful job describing the place that are writing about. Thank you for sharing this piece.
-Throrin
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This reminds me of dreams. Where you go in the mythical world of subconcious, where one can occasionally fly. I love the images, it really brings the poem alive. Well, remind me to commenet on a few more of your poems later, but I really must get some sleep now.
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cool
I love it!!!
~CC~
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oh WOW!!! wonderfully enchanting and magical Susan!!!! absolutely stunning...takes the reader to a most wonderful place... enjoyed reading this a LOT!!!! absolutely superb!!!
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Perfect
So peaceful and beautiful. Perfect for bringing hope and wonderful back to my heart. Hugs ya. Daoine -
Enchanting and Delightful
Enchanting it is!!! Love fairy tales and this one was delightful!
Love Ya, Sis!
Maureen
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this is so awesome susan, absolutely perfect, so nice in every way, definitely extremely well written, awesome job susan, wonderful wonderful writing
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Perfect
Oh, such imagery! While reading, it was like the images wrapped themselves around me and i saw everything. I keep picturing silver flowers and silver moonbeams and silver wings (for some reason silver is really on my mind). This evokes one of the most fantastic scenes i've seen in my mind for a very long time. It was a refreshment to read something enchanting and light. I thank you for posting this piece. Keep your pen flowing... -
It's definitely enchanting and a bit cute with the whole fairy theme -- keep up the good work!
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Oh this is a beautiful enchanting write Susan. I don't know how you come up with such a positive message when you are sick. When I am sick I am so crabby. Wishing you well gentle one.
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Thanks all of you for the comments
They are really apppreciated
Susan~~~~ -
don\'t touch it!
Very beautiful and enchanting. Lots of wonderful images created. The picture is a great effect.
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Beautiful write as always, you haven't lost your touch...
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Don\'t touch It!!!
Susan, I love it! Very nicely done. The pic and background really add to it. Keep up the good work. I do enjoy your work. Luv Skipper -
Delightful read Susan enjoyed you did a very nice job writing it
a very nice poem dear
Sherry
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very nice
Oh that's sweet... I simply adore a fairy poem. This is cute.
Hope you're feeling better hun...
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oooooooooooooo i'm the first!!!!!!
hehe, great little poem about those wonderful little beings we all love so much!
blessings
mike
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