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My Little Chickadee/ Acrostic

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My little chickadee

My little chickadee is having a birthday
You celebrate your 18th on this day.

Let’s all get together and have some fun
I’ll kiss you on your face so don’t try to run!
Take you by the hand dance you on the floor
Twirl you around ‘til you run to the door!
Little chickadee please come back in here
Everyone is waiting to wish you good cheer.

Celebrations have started for you here on AP
Happiness is yours as you enjoy the spree.
I brought the cake with candles to blow out
Cause it’s your day that’s what it’s all about.
Kisses from all the ladies you will receive
As you dance and laugh like you wouldn’t believe.
Do you know how much you are loved my friend?
Everyone who meets you their wishes they send.
Eat and be merry have a very happy birthday Vic.

jenelda 3-21-2006

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY FROM YOUR PLUFF PLUFF SPONGY DOLL
Written March 20th, 2006

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  • angelica silver member
    March 27, 2006
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    CONGRATULATION'S Jen for your BRONZE Trophy, a beaut tribute to our Vic.
    Hugs Joan


  • sunny day
    March 27, 2006
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    Fantabulous!!!!!

    jenelda, Congratulations on your new trophy that sits atop your mantle. Vic is special and you showed him just how much with your words here. This was a beautiful rhyming acrostic done for our humble friend. I know he loves it, so do I. Take a big bow for this one. You have a standing ovation from me to go along with my applause. Love and blessings for you, today and always. Joyce

  • Mickie27
    March 27, 2006
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    This is a fab write. I found it really funny and humorous. I am sure Vic will like the bit where you say, "Kisses from all the ladies you will receive" It is a great Acrostic and lots of fun.


  • jenelda silver member
    March 22, 2006
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    Hi Yem, Vic is a he and he's a wonderful young man if you look at angelica's poem you'll see a pic of him. Thank you Yem for the lovely comment.
    Jen.


  • Yemassee gold member
    March 22, 2006
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    Congratulations to good old Vic. Why it could be for a better person...umm, who is Vic?

    I don't know eternal poet. Think he/she would hate me? Probably.

    Kiding aside, this is a lovely tribute and it EP is half as lovely as this Acrostic I'm she (s)he is a winner!


  • jenelda silver member
    March 22, 2006
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    Hi Herman, good to hear from you. Thank you for your lovely comment on my Acrostic. Hugs back to you.

    Jen


  • Prince Charming
    March 22, 2006
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    Congratulations from Holland as well A fine acrostic again. To me you are the queen of the acrostics on this site They are always awesome Hugs Herman


  • Roseleaf
    March 21, 2006
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    cheeky

    this is so cute he has just got to love this birthday greeting its amazingly cute jel and can see he just loves it
    HaPPY BIRTHDAY VIC


    ~~Pauline


  • eternalpoet
    March 21, 2006
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    5 Stars *****

    Hey Hey my pluff pluff spongey doll has given me a bday present as precious as herself .... well, a perfect birthday would be me and my pluff pluff spongey doll in the car's backseat and in the drive in ... ( but then i hope your boyfriend wont kill me ) ...in case he try to kill me i will simply hide behind you and i am sure then he wont be able to find me

    *hugs and kisses*.. and thank you very much for this marvellous piece .... i would just love to kiss your hands for they wrote such a poem for me and made me feel special

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend..... just keep it up.... your humble little friend... .... .... ... - vic ( who else? )


  • Princess-nee
    March 21, 2006
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    Jen this is a very cheerful poem for little cheerful vic
    I liked it


  • Hinemoa silver member
    March 20, 2006
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    Dear Jen, this is a great Acrostic for your friend Vic, You have spoken of him to me so often I feel that I know him.

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY VIC

    Sally.
    Edited on Mar 20, 6:48 p.m. because ''.

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