Little angel..
.....go away
come again...
.....some other day
Devils got....
......my ear today
I'll never hear
.....a word you say.....
Author notes
....I may be putting more on this I know its not my best work, its just some little things that pop into my head. so I'm not really expecting and good feedback about this one..and I'll say it again...if you are offended by me taking childernds songs...and morphing them into something dark like..dont comment...or better yet...jus dont read...thanks...
Written March 20th, 2006
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great choice of words
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this is amazing. I never thought about morphing songs into something dark. great work
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hey i really liked this, its so damn dark and dark rules!!! nice job and keep up the great work....
totally hopeless -
Hahahahaha wow this is going better than I thought..thank you all for your comments! and I will try to put more of these on her as soon as possible heh ^^ again thanks for the comments
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O.O...wow...I love it, it's so dark that it can't help but be gorgeous like someone else I know ^^ Love you...
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simpl but morbid me likey
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this was very, very good...the simplicity and morbidity is just awesome. i love poems like this, ESPECIALLY child's poems twisted and darkened like this...very, very good job.
p.s.-i'd applaud but i'm flat broke 
~zyx -
wow thanks. and yes as soon as my mind forms either another childerens song to morph..or an add on to this..I will post it so jus keep an eye out for any changes. and thanks again for commenting
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Very good I do like it and yes I think adding more to it would be a good idea not that I dont like it just like it is very nice work keep writting
Forever into the Darkness
Sarah
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