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microwave confessions

microwave confessions

the chicken
placed in the box
BEEP BEEP
ba-gawk no more
heating       molecules
           the
T      E      A       R
apart the life of you
but dont worry
we love you
[in 4 minutes, 17 seconds]

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Written March 20th, 2006

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  • leander Moderators member
    April 4, 2006
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    Well, I can only say that this one if very different from what I'm used to read on here, but it is very original and refreshing in fact I enjoyed it!
    thank you for sharing this one with us and welcome to the sites of AllPoetry!


  • honey bear
    March 20, 2006
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    crazy

    what a mad crazy silly goofy but funny write !

  • FalbatrossF
    March 20, 2006
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    Oh man, this really made me laugh out loud! I love the "ba-gawk no more". Really, I'm gonna have to applaud this. It's not very often a poem makes me laugh out loud.

  • babygurl1014
    March 20, 2006
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    ooohhhhhh wow. that was very deep. you touched my heart with chicken. so keep up the great work. check mine out sometime. love keisha