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Anonymous

anonymous

who wrote this poem?
i do not know
i found it here
buried in the snow
who left it here
out in the cold
someone brave
someone bold?

to write such a beauty
and leave it right here
for someone to find
for someone to share
we all love it so much
but who is the author?
i want to know

but why should i bother
keeping this poem?
its so beautiful
but no one knows
who wrote it tho
i could not bear
keeping it with me
so i put it down

for someone else to see
maybe it will pass on
from years to come
but no one will know
except the one
the one who it was written by
the one who wrote about the sky
the one who on the bottom signed
i hope this poem
the right person will find

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Written March 20th, 2006

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Comments

  • ToddFawx
    March 20, 2006
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    well thank you! i love the site so far


  • honey bear
    March 20, 2006
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    lovely

    what a lovely simple but interesting poem. welcome my friend and may i say i enjoyed this poem it was lovely.


  • J.J. Sass
    March 20, 2006
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    This was certainly an interesting and unique approach. THe rhyming is pretty good for the most part.
    who wrote it tho - should be though.
    Other than that, thanks for sharing with us, and welcome to Allpoetry! I hope you'll enjoy all the site has to offer.
    Best wishes,
    Stacy