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Happy Birthday to my Eternal Poet (Rhyming Acrostic)

ETERNAL POET


Eternal poet so vicilicious
This fine young man is never pretentious
Exuding charm, his heart always humble
Radiant his smile that makes you crumble
Nobility should bow to his style
And he will always go the extra mile
Lady Joyce, a name he bestowed on me

Potentially he's the best, look and see
Open your eyes and heart to read his work
Existential his works, he'll never shirk
To give you the best, it's his little quirk

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU VIC, MY HUMBLE FRIEND!


Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)

March 20, 2006

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Vic, Lots of zzzzzzzz, es and chocos coming your way from Lady Joyce on your special day. Hope you have a wonderful day.
Written March 20th, 2006

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  • sunny day
    May 28, 2006
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    Choirangel, He did love this very much and I got so many s, es and chocos back from him for it that I was smiling all day. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this so much.
    Thank you for the applause and your lovely words my dear sweet niece. Love you always, Auntie Joyce


  • Heartofacircle
    May 28, 2006
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    aawww and I bet that he appreciated this on his birthday, this was a good acrostic.. and very sweet words, keep up the awesome poetry here!

  • sunny day
    March 27, 2006
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    Mickie27, Thank you very much for your wonderful words. My vicilicious young friend did indeed like this. We spoke about it after his comment. I did message him on his birthday and we had a lot of fun chatting. Vic is a special young man, he means a great deal to me and I value his friendship very much.
    I want to thank you for recognizing him with this contest.
    He is very wise for his years and I see a great future for him.
    Thank you for letting me be a part of his celebration. Love and blessings for you, today and always. Joyce

  • Mickie27
    March 27, 2006
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    I think you join in with everyone in hoping Vic has a wonderful day and I loved this very beautiful birthday poem that you wrote for him and I think he is happy with it too.

  • theprincess
    March 25, 2006
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    wonderful write very thoughtful good luck in the contest
    michele

  • sunny day
    March 25, 2006
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    Jo, Thank you so much for your words that are very kind for both Vic and myself. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this.
    I know my littel vicilicious one did. Love and blessings for you my dear friend, today and always.
    Joyce


  • NoWayJo
    March 24, 2006
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    though I've only met Vic in a few passing poem comments here on AP, I wish him the Happiest Birthday ever! Sweet poem to post for this special person, Sunny, and I'm sure he's smiling as big as that smile on his picture whenever coming to read it!

    Jo

  • sunny day
    March 23, 2006
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    Udit, Thank you for the applause and your loving words for your mom. That is the Vicster up there. When I got the message it was his birthday with the link to the contest I knew exactly what I wanted to do. I'm very happy that you were able to sort out your differences. Life is too short to go around angry at others. I know you understand that from the works that I have seen flow from your pen to the page as of late. I'm very happy you are enjoying the gold and even happier that you stopped by to read this. I will be in touch my dear son. It would be nice to win this one, those words came from my heart. If not, I know how happy it made Vic and that's what matters. Lots of love, Mom xoxoxoxo


  • Raazi
    March 23, 2006
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    Is that photo vic's? He's a friend now. We weren't on the best of terms earlier. But it's been sorted out now. You're gonna win this contest. The rhyming is amazing! Well done. Just thought I'd check on you. I'm enjoying my gold membership so much. Keep IMing me. I'm forgetfull.
    How's everything?
    ~The Sun Has Risen

  • sunny day
    March 22, 2006
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    Aaron, Thank you very much for the applause and your colorful words. I am very happy that you enjoyed my wishes for my humble friend Vic. He is the best. Love and blessings for you my dear friend, today and always. Joyce


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 21, 2006
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    Happy B-day Ep, hmmmm, Ep Dp, are we related, lol juest mesing, this is a greap poem, i am sure your friend will love it, keep it flowing

  • sunny day
    March 21, 2006
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    Puppydog, Thank you very much for the applause and your words for myself and Vic. He is the best. I'm very happy you enjoyed this. Love and blessings for you my friend, today and always.
    Joyce

  • sunny day
    March 21, 2006
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    Liz, Thank you very much my dear sweet niece for your lovely words. They mean the world to me. They are also very humbling. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this. Lots of love, Auntie Joyce


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 21, 2006
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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL BIRTHDAY POEM

    Very beautiful birthday poem for him. Happy birthday Eternal Poet!


  • StoneLion
    March 21, 2006
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    Lovely birthday wishes for your friend, Auntie! I'm impressed too! You're so good at rhymes! I bet he loves the piece as well! Great work! Love and s, the niece!

  • sunny day
    March 21, 2006
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    Inside, Thank you very much, both for the applause and your lovely words. This young man has become very near and dear to my heart since having met him in here. His smile alone could melt the wax on those candles in my background even if they weren't lighted. I'm very happy that you enjoyed my birthday wishes for Vic. Love and blessings for you my dear sweet friend, today and always. Joyce

  • sunny day
    March 21, 2006
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    Ron, Thank you so much for the applause and your lovely words for me. You can see that my young and oh so humble friend inspired words of praise for him. He has become very dear to me
    since I found his work through another friend. With moms like Laura Lamarca and Jancice Pickett, it's no wonder he is as he is. I'm very happy that you enjoyed my wishes for him. Love and blessings for you my dear friend, today and always. Keep eating those vitalicious muffins. LOL
    Joyce

  • sunny day
    March 21, 2006
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    Terry, Thank you very much for the applause and your lovely words. Thank you also for wishing my vicilicious Vicster a happy birthday. He is adorable, look at the smile on his face.
    Love and blessings for you my dear friend, today and always. Joyce


  • Inside and out
    March 21, 2006
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    What a lovely birthday write! You have an amazing talent sunny day! Creative, imaginative and sincere.


  • Lyndon gold member
    March 21, 2006
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    Fine, jovial but loving effort

    Lady Le Lievre, how your sun shone for Vic in this acrostic. I am a vitalicious man really; nutritious muffins for me!
    It is wonderful for me to spy a Winkling continuing to be a god soul which is why you became a Winkler in the first place. Ron


  • March 21, 2006
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    Very well done

    First off, Happy Birthday ETERNAL POET wishing you all the best:-). Joyce, this was very well written and very heartfelt.. keep up the great work.

    Cheers
    Terry

  • sunny day
    March 21, 2006
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    Shahrzad, Thank you very much my dear sweet sister, for the applause and your lovely words. Yes, he is now my little bro since I became your sis. I think we will always have a different bond however. One that is special. I'm very happy that you enjoyed my birthday wishes for the Vicilicious one.
    Lots of love from your sis, Joyce

  • sunny day
    March 21, 2006
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    Linda, Thank you very much my dear sweet sister, for the applause and your lovely words. He is such a sweetheart isn't he? I know I'm not a mom, but I could cuddle that sweet young man like a son. Well, not a mom in the real world. I'm very happy you enjoyed my wishes for Vic and that you got to see him. He is our eternal poet. Lots of love from your sis, Joyce

  • sunny day
    March 21, 2006
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    Kelly, Thank you so much for the applause and lovely comment my dear sweet sister. You can see that Vic did love it as he commented just before you sis. I'm very happy you enjoyed my birthday wishes for him. He is my humble friend and I consider him very special. Lots of love from your sis, Joyce

  • sunny day
    March 21, 2006
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    golden wrapped designer chocos For you my Vicilicious Vicster, Happy Birthday to you on this your day of days. I'm very happy that you enjoyed these wishes for you and I had to put that picture with your smile that makes a heart melt and knees crumble on the poem. You should be excited as I run up and give you a friendly cross face crippler before es to make it better. Enjoy the day Vic, it's just for you. Your Lady Joyce humbly sends all her and blessings for you, today and always. I so love your smile, you do have pearly whites. HAPPY BIRTHDAY again and don't eat too much cake.
    Lady Joyce

  • sunny day
    March 21, 2006
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    Janet, Thank you very much my dear sweet sister, both for the applause and the lovely words you gave to me. My sweet Vic deserves these and many more wishes. Thus, I run up today on his birthday with golden wrapped chocos (chocolate) and a big and for him. I'm very happy you enjoyed these wishes for my Vicster. Lots of love from your sis, Joyce
    SMOOSHES

  • sunny day
    March 21, 2006
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    Jen, Coming from his COOLEST of all ladies, Lady Joyce yes he is a sweetheart. I have come to admire our humble young friend very much in the short time I have known him. When I got the link for this conetest and he told me today is his birthday I knew something special was in order for my choco loving vicilicious young man. This came from my heart and goes to Vic's. Thank you so much for the comment. I love it, little Chickadee (state bird of Massachusetts, my home) and you are his Pluff pluff spongy doll. His wonderful sense of humor, wit and charm bring out so many good qualities in this fine young man. He is wished the happiest of birthdays from me.
    I'm very happy you enjoyed. Love and blessings for you, today and always. Joyce

  • Ir.muse
    March 21, 2006
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    This is so sweet of you dear sis to write this lovely piece for our lil brother.
    Wish you luck in the contest.
    Love you,
    Shahrzad


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 21, 2006
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    sis this is a pretty Birthday poem/Acrostics for him.. and now my friend I see what ya look like now as well lol, Happy Birthday My friend..
    Linda


  • wings of an angel
    March 20, 2006
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    Very nice write sis, Vic will love this, this was beautifully written my dear sister


  • eternalpoet
    March 20, 2006
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    5 Stars *****

    i just cant help ing right now.. tee hee...I am under constant attack of phone calls right now... ... its all going good ... and your poem, made it all go better ...THANK YOU VERY MUCH, *climbs through your windows and enters your house and runs to you and huggles you* yay....*gives few shots of stone cold stunners and tombstone piledriver *... thank you very very much.. and i dun mind my pic there ... to be honest i just dont know what i am saying here, cos i am too excited to actually write exactly how i feel... ... thanks again and again my dear COOLEST of all ladies, Lady Joyce

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.... just keep it up..... your humble little friend...... .... .... ..... - vic ( who else? )


  • Iohagh
    March 20, 2006
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    Oh I love this so and especially that such beauty came from your fingertips.

    Smoosh.


  • jenelda silver member
    March 20, 2006
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    A lovely Acrostic for our friend Vic.I call him My little Chickadee and he calls me his Pluff pluff spongy doll. He's such a cutey.I loved your birthday greetings to him.

    Jen

  • sunny day
    March 20, 2006
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    Kiran, Thank you very much for the lovely comment. My little friend is the bestest. I'm very happy you enjoyed. Love and blessings for you my friend, today and always. Joyce


  • Kiran silver member
    March 20, 2006
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    A lovely acrostic and a very sweet dedication!
    Kiran

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