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We Are One

Hello there stranger
Isn't it funny how we ended up here again
It never really goes anywhere
It seems like we're stuck in the same place
I don't know what to think of this
We don't know each other as well as we should
But I feel as if I can place all my trust in you
You make my heart sing and my spirit soar
You are a part of me,
As I am a part of you
You have my heart,
As I have yours
We are one and without each other
We are only half a spirit,
Half a heart,
Half a love
We fit together like the pieces in a puzzle,
Bound together until broken apart
I guess you could say that our fates are bound together
And we are one

Author notes

This one is to my love, James...I love you babe
Written March 20th, 2006

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  • Of you
    March 20, 2006
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    timeless

    This is so sweet and beautiful,simple and from the heart,The power of love and the beauty of it,this just explains everything,This is absolutely beautiful,one of your best,simple,true and powerful,it deserves a gold right now
    Keep on writing alanna,you are absolutely amazing