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Your final day.

Open the hearts of today,
let them die and bleed away.
Hold yourself to blame,
nothing else will remain.
Broken hearts in your path,
can't you do the fucking math? 
She is not a fucking dream,
And thanks to you her blood will stream.
No longer is she real,
Yet you act as if its no big deal.
Day by day you live your life,
Why not end it with your fucking knife?
You don't deserve to live,
You have done things that they won’t forgive.
Now is when you make your choice,
This is the time to use your voice.


So let my words bleed away,
This will be your final day.

Author notes

This is just a random thing.
It is also about a friend of mine,
and if i ever see the guy who hurt her I will kill him.
Written March 19th, 2006

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  • The Black Raven
    March 17, 2007
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    love

    rhis is like how my dad and i were now it's like me and my mom


  • Murdered-In-Ink
    March 20, 2006
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    Wow,I like this alot. I really can feel the hate pouring from it. Very nice. I am with you on the killing part. Lucky to have you as my friend

    ~Emo Shark~