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lover past

I'm swallowing the pouches under my eyes and all the stupid tears I cried
There's no reason for this, damn it
I just... four months... is it enough time for you to forget your lover past?
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You miss playing chess with her; she played you best
You gave her your love, and yet she gave you no rest
You tell me you love her no more, and...
I believe you, I do
But we have both, I said (and you admitted)
Been apt to contradict ourselves

Author notes

... bah, I'm too insecure and depressing and indecisive and crappy for my own good.
Written March 19th, 2006

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  • surfer-dude
    September 1, 2006
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    Hey jude, it's been so long... maybe you remember me

    wonderful poem, never stopped reading them.


  • irene plunkett
    May 9, 2006
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    i dont think your work is crappy. i think ya work is cool and im a very insecure person. great write. from irenexxxx


  • superdoug
    March 19, 2006
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    super super