Sometimes it seems that the weight is all on me
and that I have screwed up
way to much just to apologize for.
So I just wanted to say thank you
and stop apologizing
cause what good does it do.
So thank you for being there in my times of bad
and lending me a helping hand.
Thank you for keeping me
after everything that I do.
It seems you do this all for me
and do nothing for yourself
but you always say it is okay
and that I need not worry for you.
You are like my guardian angel
but I know you are human too.
It must take so much strength out of you
but you help anyways.
So thank you for staying
not only in the bad
but also in the good
because a lot of friends don't do that.
You never forgot me
and I thank you for this.
You are the greatest person I have ever met.
With the best advice
and the funniest jokes
you make everyday the best I have ever lived.
I love to talk to you about serious topics
and the lighter ones too
like the millions of times I fall in love
or like how much I disagree with Bush.
You laugh and smile
even when my jokes aren't that funny.
You are like my guardian angel
sent from above.
I thank you for not leaving me
and seeing my dreams too.
Thank you for being a great friend
and helping me with everything I need.
So I wrote this poem just thinking of you
you never forgot me
and I never forgot you.
Author notes
To all my friends. See I knew I could make a happy poem....it just took alot of scraping the bottom to get all this happy stuff. YEAH. Hope you like this! Sorry it is so long....oooh here is something funny my friends did before Bush was re-elected
they said "Vote for my Bush" whilst pointing down there pants
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Written March 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- Open to Those Who Know Happiness by Erdz.
300 points, ended March 21, 2006, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Awww I Like This Poem, You Seem To Be Very Grateful For The Help This Friend Has Given. Sounds Like A Brilliant Friend. Great Poem
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So does that mean y'all are married....engaged.....bf and gf.....really good friends that may be more? I promise I shall read those!!!^^ Love is soooo contagious and my friends have been giving me there love bugs for the past few years....and I think I am beginning to run out of repellent(he he)! Well have a good time...maybe go out...go have some fun....make this an event^^!
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I'll tell you what happens. Most likely, he'll be really touched. The last time I told him I loved him properly was...well at least a month ago, but I tell you, he is the most amazing person. He inspires me to write so much, you should see everything I've written because of him. (Read What I See) Perfectly enough, today is our 1 year and 4 month anniversary!!
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Wow that is cool. You go do that. Like asap......and I am curious....maybe you can tell me what happens...unlees it is too personnal. LIVE FOR THE MOMENT!!!!! Follow your heart. It won't lead you anywhere you aren't ready to go.
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Aw wow, so touching! You have inspired me and made me realize there's a certain someone who's been amazing to me, whom I haven't appreciated and acknowledged and thanked properly for ages! Thank you!! Now I have to write something to him telling him I love him. Thanks so much for reminding me, and thanks for sharing this. Everyone needs a reminder.
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That was very sweet and heartfelt. I think you need to give this to the friend you wrote it for so they can know how much they mean to you. Very sweet!
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This is one that i had to read more then one time. I have problems with the beat but thats just me. its vary good. i liked it alot.
~~~~Love Always~~~~
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I want to be that person, because i know i can be if i got the chance.
very good write,
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yes we all need friends..... and sometimes they are the hardest ones too keep once we show up to many of our flaws
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That was great, I think you did a good job at getting across your message. Not many friends are as loyal as yours.
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An unexpected trip down memory lane. *tears*
That made me a little misty...
But now is not the time for me to think about my life.
That is a great peice of writing. It is heart-felt and that is really what makes it great. It's good to read something of a thank you poem rather than something depressing. Well done. -
TRULY HEARTFELT!
This is very heart-felt, you know sometimes people just don't take the time to thank someone they care about, and this here shows me that there's souls out there that still do, I thank you for showing the love within your heart. Keep on sharing and spreading the words that uplift the ones ya love. This is truly beautiful, keep up the great works, and much love to you and yours!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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They said "Vote for my Bush" while pointing down there pants.
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haha this is great... ill comment more when i judge... great write and good luck
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Awesome
That was amazing Jess
I loved it... It is very sweet and sincere
You are sooo adorable, I envy those who actually know you
coz they have more fun with you than i do
I would like you to change that yellow colour though, it is not important but it does not match with the background and hurts the eyes.
Good luck in the contest and keep on writing.. I loved this!!!
By the way what is the funny thing your friends did before Bush was re-elected???
Nooni
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