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You Avenue

\Love was like an abandoned path, \
\Walking along the bend.\
It would’ve led me where I wished,
Or led to a dead end.



When I was lost all I had to do,
Was look for the right direction.
I knew that you would come my way,
And guide me to your affection.



When I arrived to the fork in the road,
I didn’t know what to do.
I guess I overlooked the signs,
That pointed right to you.



Now and again we would go on trips,

Which took us around the world.
And when the traveling wouldn’t end,
My hand was yours to hold.




The other times that I got lost,
Were people pushing me through.
Northern stars that showed me the way,
Toward the walkway titled, “You.”

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i had to write a comparison for my english project is all...
Written March 19th, 2006

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  • Xxpain-is-beutyxX
    March 26, 2006
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    WOW i LOVE this one too i can tell you are VERRY talented!!!!!