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…the heat inspired within

my loins

spreading,

coursing throughout

my being like

wild-fire—

surging into you with

every thrust—

verily glowing in

the rise of

electrical bliss—

bodies in

metronomical unity,

bucking in

the soulful syncopation of

opposing conjoining—

the indomitable iron will of

my passion

sliding in and out of

the sweet, slick,

supernal solace of

your surrender—

the white radiance of

ecstasy over-flowing—

gasping—groaning—

panting—screaming—

and—at last—

each of us—

exploding

fulfillment in

the other!!…

…then…

in unity,

unwilling to

separate away…

yet tingling in

the wake of

needs and hungers

sated…

tender caresses…

deep, soulful kisses… 

…slowly—

fires again begin

to build…

Author notes


Written March 19th, 2006

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  • Lil Langston
    March 19, 2006
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    Excellent Poem!!!!!

    Hot indeed!!!!!! Nice Work!!!!!!!


  • Bride Of Hate
    March 19, 2006
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    Wow. This is very VERY hot! Brilliant, refined erotica. Great to see some non-sleazy material for once. This is definately a beautiful piece. Brilliant work!
    Kitty x