Her beauty leaks from every aspect of her soul
Emerald eyes stare back toward you.
Her seductive smile more beautiful then words can express.
Your heart pounds from the mere sight of her.
You know she is beautiful, and you love her.
she takes a drink of her wine, still holding your eyes with her own.
her crimson lipstick leaves a mark on the beautiful glass.
You wish you could kiss those lips.
You wish you were still with her.
That nothing went wrong,
She feels the same, but you know why you cannot have her.
They forbid it, and she must listen for now.
You have both planned your leave,
To move away from it all, so you may have her to yourself.
Don't you love how she looks at you?
Her eyes are beautiful, and her lips draw you.
Oh how long must you wait.
you want her back in your arms you don't care what it takes.
But for now you must loathe and dread the wait.
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Okay, If you read this comment on it.
If you don't like it comment anyway, I could use the critisisim
Written March 18th, 2006
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wooo!
hey, i like this - it is beautifully written, made me feel like i was actually there
keep up the fab work and take care
xxx
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this is beautiful.
the wanting, the needing, the waiting...
i feel like this right now actually....
its beautiful...
wonderful write.
xx
rilly -
excellent
i really like it!i mean ur really good at this i mean i just write free verse but u write both
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