Staring at a blank page,
I can not seem to express my rage.
Hate for us is all you seem to posses,
for some reason this is what you cannot digest;
Dreams seem like my only escape,
you have put me in this state.
Such a tragedy you have put me in,
it seems like neither of us will win.
Can you not see that this is fate?
That is exactly what you hate.
I know you hate the way I feel,
but unfortunately, you just need to deal.
This is not a simple crush,
or just an emotional rush.
If i were to try and listen to my brain,
I would probably go completely insane.
Listening to you would be worse,
Its like I've been fucking cursed
Don't treat me that fucking way,
I won't give you the time of day.
I won't give in, you wont give up,
I will not listen, I'm not your lost little pup.
Author notes
This is to my rents...
They piss me off more then anyone I know.
--LostForGood-- (for the contest) this was a prewrite
Written March 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- -ForTheBrokenHearts- by x0rachel0x.
400 points, ended April 11, 2006, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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what an outburst and expression, i can relate
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i really like this. it hads so much feeling and you just know what you're are talking about... you even put in rhymes, i am horrid at rhyming well.... its just awesome!
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Amazing
Believe me, I know. Well okay, I can't say that since I haven't lived your life, but I do understand. Anyway, this is a great poem. The anger just explodes on the page. I can feel it throughout. Love the ending as well. You really tell it how it is. Great work.
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