For real
Seeing you kills me inside
Reminding me of my crushed pride
To know you know how I feel
But think my feelings aren’t real
Oh how could you not know
My love is for real.
Oh how can I make you see my love is for real
Can’t you just accept me for being me?
Watching you walk away
Oh how can I make you look my way.
My heart can’t take it anymore
I might just give in
I’m falling to the floor
I don’t think I’ll be able to live with out you
Please believe how I feel is for real
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Written November 25th, 2005
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i know exactly how you feel, cause i was going through the exact same thing. your writing is really good i hope you keep adding cause i can really relate.
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HI ANDREA!!!, I CAN RELATE TO YOUR POEM, it has a very longing feel to it. It's hard to love someone and yo're not sure if they feel the same towards you. When you really like someone, yo're always observing their every move and trying to find out how they feel, and sometimes it's so hard. It can really drive you crazee, because even a small movement or a certain look from the person you like can break yo're heart. Anyways, I love you're poem very much. Reply soon, JESSICA.
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I think as long as you express yourself in your wriitng it doesn't matter really if it is corny...well not to me anyway...I hope you will keep writing and sharing your words..
welcome to the site
~Kristy
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