You shimmer,
Transform inside out,
Strobe into a thousand frames--
Your voice like honey,
Like acid flowing through my brain;
Though Venus brightly glitters
Like a lovely icy sliver
In your eye--
Still I crave to be abused
In the precious name of servitude.
You quiver,
Bend in and out of shape,
Burst into a thousand flames--
Your smile like sunlight,
Like hemlock seeping through my veins;
Though Venus brightly glitters
Like a lovely icy sliver
In your eye--
Still I crave to be abused
In the precious name of servitude.
The sharp echo of your heels,
The numbing perfume in the air,
The pointless self-recriminations
That one tries so hard not to spare--
Nothing else is left;
Bit by bit,
I crumble
With every nasty step of your departing feet--
How good it feels to loath myself and weep!
Author notes
Okay...
I did not write this. This was written to me by me Ex whom I still love.
I think it needed some public viewing. This poem is too amazing to keep to myself.
I could never write like this. And he deserves to be have something up here. Well I doubt he would ever actualy want to be on this site but oh well.
Written March 18th, 2006
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i'm in awe
this poem is really amazing. i think it is one of the best i have read... honestly. i could not criticize such a beautiful piece.
Though Venus brightly glitters
Like a lovely icy sliver
In your eye--
Still I crave to be abused
In the precious name of servitude.
love how he repeats those lines. just amazing, amazing. -
Yeah..I might post more of his things up here too. He got me into writing so he deserves the credit. He still helps me when I can't think, and I love him so much for everything.
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this is great. I love it!!!! your right he is amazing poet.
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Thank you. And we will sometime soon.
Unfortunatly there are things between us now -
hope you really rise again in tru love thats scarce again you never know what is true love or true lover...
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