What is there to say,
she never wanted to be this way.
Her heart has finally shattered,
a thousand pieces now scattered.
Don't they see its killing her?
She refuses to end it..
They refuse to lose, she must forget every bit.
They say that she is a fuck-up,
but in reality she is just love struck.
They try so hard to keep her away,
and this struggle lives for another day.
He promises he will get her out of there,
away from what she cannot bear.
She is waiting for that wondrous day,
when he will finally take her away.
In the end of this fairytale,
it will not have a rusty nail.
He is her prince charming.
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Yeah...
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Written March 18th, 2006
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it was excellent
WOW!i really like it!and some of my poems r religoius because i am religoius and thanks for the commet on the poem! -
your welcome, i dont believe in a happy ending in life cause thats what it is the end.. you welcome
the black rose
david -
this is so very someone i know. she keeps waiting for her prince charming but you have more faith than she does and you wrote about it very well. good writing. viyanna r langager
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i love it!!!!!!!!!! this absolutely rocks!!!!!!!!!! keep it up!!!
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this poem had the perfect depiction of the title. i do hope that one day you are rescued and taken to a far away place that only mear dreams can describe. very nice write
the black rose
david
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