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Your Greatest Gift

A simple utterance, whispers of vengeance
these hollow cries
For you

Damned by your laughter, to an ominous beyond
this broken heart
From you

Memories only silhouette against the dieing sky
those fragile lies
You spoke

A time not like any other, lost in an endless abyss
your loving eyes
Your demons

A sin to love thee as apples from Edan
those desires so pure
Your tricks

Haunted by the sound of your voice, only empty
this demented mind
A gift

Determined to seek that which has killed my soul
these wounds
From you






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I found out that nothing is as it seems and our greatest desires are only but a dream that will never come true, it fighting for it will only destroy you. No hope, love is lost, forever... my butterfly...... if only.....
Written March 18th, 2006

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  • tragediey-stricken
    March 19, 2006
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    good

    I loved it! Great job!!

  • kitkatkatie1
    March 19, 2006
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    this was really awesome, took the words right outta my mouth!! i love it! Hi i havent talked to u in a while... been busy, gettin my heart broken and what not.... oh well... n e who how u been