Tears fill my eyes at the end of every day,
Why can't I get over feeling this way?
They ruin these hopes and dreams,
My heart is tearing at the seams.
I can't keep living this way,
Striking out the calender at the end of each day.
18 months are left, then we can be together,
For this time we call forever.
But this love will never be allowed,
We can not even see each other while with a crowed.
They feel that we should be apart,
They have felt that way from the start.
I will not be worn,
This heart of mine can not be torn.
He has saved me from reality,
And has shown me what is meant to be.
So here we are, gun in hand,
This is how we will take a stand.
This is a new Romeo and Juliet story,
In all its bloody glory.
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This is about me and my ex...
I would like you to critque it.
I wan't people to know how I feel.
Written March 18th, 2006
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wow
i've always loved R and J but you've added a wonderful differance
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Oh this is a great poem!!! GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST AND DON'T 4 GET 2 LEAVE A COMMENT ON ONE OF MY RECENT POEMS!!!!
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wonderful and beautiful
i can see why this means alot to you...
the feeling, the passion, the love...
w0w is all i can say...
another beautiful, wonderful poem.
great job i'll be reading more of you writes as time goes by.
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great work your feeling of wait is freely visible with every word and it flows amooth
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Excellent
I enjoyed reading this poem. I could definitely feel the emotion. Truly touching. Such strong images of love and longing. You might want to fix the grammatical errors. In my opinion it would make it a better read. Other than that, great poem.
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