When you come home
tonight say hello,
listen to your heart
and your mind.
When you come home
don't look or call for me.
I'll be above the clouds
looking at you.
Even though I'm gone
I'll be with you.Look
at pictures and I'll come alive.
My ashes lie here building
slowly but the soul has been taken.
Slowly you'll heal and love
someone or something else.I'll
be fine you'll always have more
love to share and give that special
thing.
I might be the person you loved
the most but share that love.you
can always make more my friend.
If only I could live longer I would
of.I was 3 months older then you, you
were my sister i was your brother
but now I'm died.
Author notes
This was a peice i made about my dog i lost on November the 2end 2005.
Written March 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- What is heaven? by Elvenfairy.
300 points, ended April 2, 2007, 9 entries
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I'm sorry you lost your dog. This poem reflects the way many people feel, those who say 'do not weep for me'. Thanks for entering this into my contest
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You have a lot of talent for your age.
this is very good, and I hope you never give up writing -
very very good
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