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parents are a pain

they embarrass you
they tease you
they yell at you
they laugh at you
yet they say they love you

they are the source
of all our growing pains
5O% of our stress
and a sometimes just
a pain in the bunny

i wish i could
send mine away
give them away
hell, I'd sell them, even

I'd give them money
to get off my back
and stop ragging my bunny
to get things done
cause I'll do them on my own time

but under the surface
and beneath the old geezer shell
is a little child
who was through just the same
but seems to be suffering
from Alzheimer's

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Written March 18th, 2006

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  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    March 26, 2006
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    this is funny, thanks for the entry and nice write keep it up


  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    March 21, 2006
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    this is a good piece so true thanks for the entry


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    March 18, 2006
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    they embarrass you
    they tease you
    they yell at you
    they laugh at you
    yet they say they love you

    That is sooo true. But I know that my parents really do love me and I wouldn't trade them for the world even if they are over protective control freaks.

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker who lost all aka Sacred Shadows


  • CapturedMoon
    March 18, 2006
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    I like it. It came to a nice ending even though I'm not sure I agree 100% with what it says. You have talent, I can't deny that.

  • Wisdom Girl
    March 18, 2006
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    heeheehee. i wrote it off the top of my head

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