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Dynamic

Minute effervescence of the empyreal now.


~~Suseann~~~

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Written March 18th, 2006

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    March 18, 2006
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    Whoa! Now that is a powerful sentence. I got such an intense image off of this one line. I may have to write about it later if I have time (the image in my head) Fantastic! Blessings, Gypsy


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 18, 2006
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    WONDERFUL

    This is a wonderful expression of nature and how a youth sees it.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 18, 2006
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    Very expressive words in one sentence ~ captivating! Thank you for your entry... x